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And To This I Have Felt Such A Thing

I’ve got this unbelievable drive to make up a world with thought...
I want to write it but cannot
There's something in my life I used to love to do
but when I try to recall it an empty void is there...
like I just dreamt it
Thinking makes me dream with my eyes open
and get lost
Then I stay in my head all day
and hate to be pried out by meaningless tasks
Such a world should be in my head
But when I daze all I find is a room
White and full of raw emotion
Unable to be written

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this is me right at this moment

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  • Ryno
    July 22, 2007

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    I liked this, it was a cool take on the entry... not sure if I liked some of the linebreaks and its allignment...some parts were also a little chiche but others were gold, like living in a room built of raw emotion. Nice work and thanks for the entry.