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Separation





Songs play
    with faded memories;

forbirdden love forged
     in the shadows.


Heart aches
  with yesteryear's kiss
     stained upon lips;

no room left
    for thoughts
        of 'what if'.


Vows sealed
   destiny sentence;

kept from apart,

separation from you,
             my only crime.




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  • HeavenScent4U
    July 21, 2007

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    very full of love and longing for the days of yesterday. ah, those what if's, what do you we do with them? i think we all have some of those sweetie best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 21, 2007

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    Such a bittersweet song this is....
    So beautiful and sad...The ending is so lovely and touches the heart!

    Excellent take on the pic.....Great job!

    Lynda


  • coffeeangel316
    July 21, 2007
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    this is such a beautiful write. I love it. great job...