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~Return~

Missing image
Layers of time
pile high against youth
leaving trails
of a top to toe dynasty.

One man's song
orchestrated in poetic grace
spoken to an audience
unable to perceive.

Someday
when the seats are taken
sounds of a baby's cry
will be breathed in by love

and the wheels shall turn once more
sands rising through shadows
bringing an old soul
back to where he's been...

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  • Ryno
    July 22, 2007

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    I loved your take on the picture and insightful and creatively incoorperated descriptions...great phrasing and topic...thanks for the enjoyable piece.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 21, 2007

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    Nice,

    I enjoyed this wonderfully inscribed piece,
    and wish you all the best in this contest my friend!
    Thanks for sharing, peace, Timothy~