Lost in the mind of thought
wanders a Man in need
in need of not facts about the now
but wonders of the galaxies out there
thoughts of the smallest thing,
to Space itself
here walks a Man
lost in his thought
of what he cannot explain
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Quickie - Picture For Your Pens #5 by Ryno.
300 points, ended July 22, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I get lost in my thoughts all the time when I am listening to music. Loved that this piece brought me there too with beautiful descriptions. Wonderful take on the prompt, thanks for the entry.
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This is a great piece!
I know that I have had times like this.
Sometimes you just can't help but to get
lost in your thoughts. They can take you
anywhere at anytime. Most times they leave
you lost in another world with no answers
to follow. Great work here and thanks a
lot for sharing this one! Best of luck
to you with it in the contest!
Jeremy0826
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