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New Day

Light in the darkness
In you I see new hope
With you I've found
a reason to live

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  • EdibleRoses
    August 26, 2007

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    Short, sweet, and to the point.
    I like how it ends, as well. I, like you, enjoy short poems. Beautiful work, as usual =]


  • Transcend All
    August 1, 2007

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    Transcend All

    My first impression, hope. Even in darkness there is light, which to me sounds comforting right now. Groovy write!

    Namaste'


  • Broken Machine
    July 20, 2007

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    Beautiful! I love this poem. I love it I love it I love it! Great job!