Ed

Old Spirit,
you landed on my doorstep
in a neat little package
tied with a red bow.

Instant connection,
reaction,
words flowed.

Big heart,
full of love and life.
kindness flows though you
with ease and sensitivity.

Instant connection,
reaction,
worlds flowed.

Gentleman,
not afraid to open up.
with walls down
your eyes are open windows.

so quickly you stole a piece of my heart.......

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wishintreeUK
September 12, 2007

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They say the eyes are the mirror to the soul, this seems to be so in a positive sense as I read the opening words of this particular poem of yours. Someone, somehow, has given a glimpse of their true self that you have been able to recognize in all its simplicity. On the other hand, this could also be a reflection of self that you have recently come across once again.
A very thought provoking piece of writing, one I truly did enjoy reading.

~Katie~