open memories
memories better off dead
people changeing
not as bad as me
once a simple and clean girl
now look at me
scars
playing with fire
buring myself alive in my mind
trying to get high
even though i know
i shouldnt
stop it they say
do they know i cant?
drinking blood
not even my blood
what have i become?
Author notes
i know i have changed alot over the years ... not for the better
A contest entry
- Tell A Stranger Your Secrets by The Lost Boy -PP-.
600 points, ended August 4, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mirror Monsters by Forgot2Breathe.
300 points, ended September 4, 2007, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Pain...Make Me Cry and Feel the Pain by MusicMattnessLives.
375 points, ended March 3, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Painful Desires by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1000 points, ended March 6, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Horrific, Dark and Erotic writes by Ice Queen.
525 points, ended May 17, 36 entries
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wow this is really good. I like the way you wrote it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Keep up your amazing work!! Congrats on your honorable mention.
CrimsonViper -
this was well written. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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this is a really good poem,
i think humanity is so vain these days,
less and less people can accept change,
i think its ridiculas,
but know theres always people who will care,
like i am a stranger but i would be here for anybody,
memorys haunt us all,
some people have happy ones others bad either one they haunt us,
good luck in the content,
much love Vamp xxxx -
wow...just wow
this poem kinda left me speechless for a moment, I can relate to what you mean....so many of us can I'd bet -
wow, its like you see yourself as a monster. there was NOTHING i could find in this poem i didn't like. i am utterly amazed. great job and good luck.
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really emotional
great job with the writing
loved it
buring myself alive in my mind
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Amazing!
tHAT WAS AN EXTREMELY EMOTIONAL POEM! i LOVE IT SO MUCH! gOOD JOB, AND KEEP IT UP! i KNOW WHAT IT FEELS LIKE TO HAVE CHANGED FOR THE WORSE......YOU DON'T KNOW WHO YOU ARE ANYMORE.....SUCKZ DOESN'T IT? kEEP THE PEN TO THE PAPER!
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Change is the only thing that helps us discern between what we are, and what we want to be.
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