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Save Me

I can't breath
I can't see
I've lost what's inside of me

It's in my head
True love is dead
And there's nothing left for me

A cold imbrace
Sweps my face
While warmth begins to die

Now let me out
I'm still full of doubt
No one can hear me cry

Open up my insides
Tare out all these false cries
Save me from myself

BY: Corey Klosterman

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just something i'm working on getting through. i seem to be hurting the girl i love most by trying to get where i need to be. so i'm working even harder to get there, this is on way that helps. getting it out, another is getting your feed back so please tell me what you think. don't hold back.

please tell me what you think.....

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  • BlackxInk
    July 20, 2007
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    i guess it's ok....

    i kinda like this one but i'm not truely sure so i guess you'll just have to tell me what you think.....