Just a little bit,
A little pill of you,
Just enough to get me hooked,
Even though it's so see through.
Futile, that's the word,
Resisting you is such,
Pointless, have you heard?
I need that little touch.
I love the way you pump,
Right through my streams of red,
Through my veins your moving,
And it's going to my head.
So come and hide,
Slip away with me,
What happens next,
Just wait and see.
I'll take another shot,
I'll take just one more pill,
I'll have you one more time,
I'm addicted, free of will.
A contest entry
- ♥[Addiction]♥ What sucks you in? by Salt Therapy.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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Very clear and well written. I asked that it didn't rhyme, but if this is who I think it is then it's okay. I like it! Thanks for entering, good luck!
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i like the last verse but its all very good, i think your a brilliant writer..keep it up
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I love it.
Exellent poem and recon it's awesome for the contest.
Good work
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