Lush Curls bounce as she walks,
she the world's known beauty queen.
envy & green eyes turn to glare,
despising her beauty and charm.
her black eyeliner couldn't get thicker
if she tried.
[it became thicker than the lady at dairy queen's eyebrows]
along with that, her lips were already
arranging meetings at
the gentlemen's club;;
She may look like little miss perfect,
but you could never know [understand]
when she'll
explode.
A contest entry
- A Sims 2 Picture Inspiration Quickie by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended July 24, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nice stuff, this has a libbertines feel to it, as in the band:
along with that, her lips were already
arranging meetings at
the gentlemen's club;;
it has a nice modern feel i liked this a lot
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"along with that, her lips were already
arranging meetings at
the gentlemen's club;;"
my favorite part! Good job! -
fantastic piece this completely blew me away wow
love the abstractness and imagery and vocabulary
nice work
thanks so much for entering and I wish you good luck in this contest
keep writing
kinda reminds me of explode by nelly furtado
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