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Music plays no more

Sound of music used to calm my soul
used to make my feet find rythem in the beat
used to bring a smile to my lips

The night was brought to life
when the music poured throgh the window
all the animals even joined in

When you left me behind in the hollow coldness
music has stopped for the final time
I just sit by the window crying into a pillow

The music died as I died inside
no more beautiful sound being heard in the air
as you hear me breath no more

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  • smntha.
    July 26, 2007

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    Ver beautiful and I know the feeling of being connected somehow with music. It fuels the soul. Beautiful write!


  • Celticmoon
    July 20, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Forever in blue jeans



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