It has been too long and yet the hurt is still strong...you broke my heart.
Yes, I can feel the weight of her hate...just remember I'm the woman scorn.
I'll never hang my head in defeat,although it's YOU I need...But sadly we must part.
I despise knowing that she spreads lies and the two sides(love and hate) I'm torn.
Broken Dreams, you tore apart by the seams...did you really care?
Shoulders squared with pride, anger, this feeling I will not hide...Not all is forgiven.
Yes You cut me pretty deep, I never promised your secrets to keep, your betrayal I'll share.
Ever knowing that love caused this fate,I turn to see thin ice you skate...I laugh, REVENGE is why I'm driven.
A contest entry
- [PinupDollDisaster] by whiterabbit..
450 points, ended August 18, 2007, 25 entries
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This is really great and I just love the way you wrote it. I really like this a lot.

