Night after night,
year after year,
I wait for you.
Locked away for 15 years,
a hardened criminal by now,
my sweet adorable angel.
Getting out tomorrow,
finally I watch alone for the last time.
The day has come and now you're home.
We watch together,
the most beautiful sky I have ever seen.
Together again,
the both of us,
the color of the sky matches the passion we feel.
We make love until dawn.
All those years apart,
made up by one magical night.
We unite as one,
we are one.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration Running 5 Days Only! by DancingShadowCorpse.
300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I definately agree vici377, I can feel a lot of pent up passion as she put it. I cant imagine how wonderful that night must have been after 15 years.. good god.. thats a long anxious wait. Being seperated over time and then after such a long wait, reunited.. as one. Beautiful poem! Thank you for entering!
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wow
can really feel the pent up passion in this one.. you know besides dark the erotica ( and i know this one isn't erotica, but on the same track..) you are excellent... this one was great... good luck in the contest.. it really made me feel the words and the message you are trying to get across.. way to go!!!
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