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No Sorry

It's overrated
don't waste your breath
no sorry today
it may cost you your death

Unnecessary
please spare the time
no sorry tomorrow
change your fate on a dime

Incomprehensible
don't hurt yourself
no sorry for me
all emotions off the shelf

Apologize for things that aren't yours-
overrated.
For small matters-
unecessary.
For me-
incomprehensible.

Impossible
that anyone cares
no sorry right now
you'll get caught in its lair

Gratifying
my very own words
no sorry for you
for you'll think it absurd

My very own words
disembodied and typed
no sorry tonight
out of my mind, the word's been wiped.

Author notes

Interesting poem... inspired by matthew-, who constantly berates me for apologizing unnecessarily.

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  • matthew-
    July 20, 2007

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    *smiles* Stealer . I like it.. its cute. It's not.. beratement.. just my saying hehe. Thanks for writing it.. the words mean bunches.


    • ThresholdofInsomnia
      July 23, 2007
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      In my mind berating comes from love and concern... mostly. Hope life's treating you better!
      ~Anne~