I open my eye's.
The door swings open.
[He stands there.]
This eye's pears the darkness.
This man is no man to me.
He is everything i fear and {hate.}
He is the eye's jugging me.
He is the one i /cry/ for.
The one my hart longs for
to see him one last time like i did
the day i met him.
Will i ever see him like that agen?
All this and more before my eye's
in the brief moments are eye's meet.
[I wake up.]
This time for real.
(I am alone.)
He is not there.
And that is how [i like it.]
Author notes
option 2 i am 16 hi this is about some one i liked and he terned out my be and idiot. some people suck. but it's good to know that not all do. it will take some time to get over him. but i know i will thanks for you're support.
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I understand what that's like to wake up and be relieved he isn't there...You did really great on this poem. You made a couple of spelling mistakes. My fav. part was Will I ever see him like that agian. Meaning you know that this guy has changed. "tis very goo
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There is such an apparent contrast of feeling. Almost like the fine line between love and hate. Pain will cause us to think and view things in such a different light.
Anger will drown out the good memories if there were any, but is also part of the grieving process when we realize that people are not who we thought.
Nice and simple expression of your feelings and emotion. Best of luck!
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thansk. i have had nothing but bad luck with gyes but for me this was the worst cuz i realy fell for him. and i fell heard and i was truly happy for once and with out evin caring he told that all away from me. but my friends are hellping me to see that i dont need him to be happy.
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