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You





You're standing there,
watching me cry,
watching me cry...
Standing there, letting me die
Don't you see the terror in my eyes?

chorus:
I feel betrayed
I feel begotten
I feel belittled
I feel beloved
All because of you
only because of you

I feel possessed,
clearly obsessed
with thoughts of you,
only of you

chorus:
I feel betrayed
I feel begotten
I feel belittled
I feel beloved
All because of you
only because of you

I can see you standing there
I can feel you stare
You're trying to mess with my head,
but you want me dead instead

chorusrepeat 3 times)
I feel betrayed
I feel begotten
I feel belittled
I feel beloved
All because of you
only because of you

It was all because of you
just you
(whisper) you



Author notes

WARNING : The next few of my pieces are old and written over 3-9 years to go. The language may be grammatically incorrect and the detail and style may be off. I just want you all to see the difference between my writing then and now. Feel free to tell me your opinion. It is gladly appreciated. Also, many of these pieces are of Christian origin, and though they might sound strictly textbook, I do not share those beliefs anymore. Actually, I am atheist, but that is besides the point and the pieces will not be changed because I am still proud of them nonetheless and refuse to disrupt the essence that was clearly integrated into it from the beginning. Thank you for reading my work and I hope you get the deeper meaning of it and come back for more.





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