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I'm Moving On



I wish these thoughts
never came close to my mind
But now I'm facing them
as they can't be left behind...

Now I see the truth
That I have been hiding from myself
I was afraid to admit
That my senses were put on the highest shelf...

But now I face the truth
and say that I have been fooled
And my mind still objects
But I say, "Objection over-ruled!"

So no need to haunt me
in reality and in my dreams

I let go of my love...
I let go of my torture...
I set myself free...

Author notes

If you don't know me, don't comment. Please, I don't need comforting words about how good the poem was (or how bad) or how life is always that way or that I'm going to find someone else...
I just had to let it go out on paper and so I did... Leave it to me to digest right now...
Uh... I'm not in a good mood.

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Comments


  • bedovich
    July 20, 2007

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    sisssssss:S this is sooo powerful:S:S but so much pain so much agony:S i love you sis (L)great write


  • LifeStartsNow
    July 20, 2007

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    well sweety,you will get words of comfort fromme
    cause I loved the poem, and sweetie things will get
    better, or i'll hug you til you see that they will


    • TheMoodchangingPoet
      July 20, 2007
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      hehehehe
      You already made me laught... that's pretty much a lot
      Thanks honey... and the above didn't quite apply to you because you know me and you are my friend