Racing through the sky, I search for a star,
I travel near and then I move very far,
Cart wheeling eagerly, I reach the edge,
Holding on tight, I turn the next page,
And there is the star, falling through the sky,
Red and gold splatter as it passes me by,
Dancing among colours, I twirl and spin,
I dance with the stars and autumn wind.
A contest entry
- Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
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Comments
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Lovely imagery here, and the rhyme and meter are smooth in their flow. Your poem brings to mind a carefree experience I had one autumn day a while back . . . Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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aw this is pretty, good imagery and flow. also you had a great ryme, i love the lines "And there is the star, falling through the sky,
Red and gold splatter as it passes me by" its very uplifting and colourful! good luck in the contest x
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