Weary knees can fall to bring
The state that never escapes from
So much lost, already gone
The noise from inside
Has me shaking
Sink lower now to bring
Sink deeper now
I've never had such a problem
I've never had myself free
It won't last through the night
But sure as hell is a fire
I will cross the line to bring it in
Author notes
Just expressing addiction in general, and what lengths one might go to get what they want.
A contest entry
- ♥[Addiction]♥ What sucks you in? by Salt Therapy.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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hmm...I like it! It's good...I've never been addicted to anything...well drug or alcohol that is! And this gives me a sence of what it's like! I love it! It's a great write! ^^
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Thank you for saying that this is about addiction overall. This is a great example of what I wanted to see. Thanks for entering my contest, good luck!
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