I'm trying, I'm failing, I can't do this anymore
Dying to forget, I have no choices
Failling so miserably, to make it all right
But what is there left to do in this living nightmare.
You're keeping us trapped, but 8 years can this last
I'm trying, I'm failing, I can't do this anymore
But what can we do, not is left with our backs against the wall
So, I've no more.
You took him away, left him to die
In a land filled with death
I'm trying, I'm failing, I can't do this anymore
I blame you.
We're dying in vain
Can't stop the madness
This unbearable sorrow, confusion, amist the pain of life
I'm trying, I'm failing, I can't do this anymore.
Died trying, kept failing, couldn't do it anymore
A contest entry
- ♥[Addiction]♥ What sucks you in? by Salt Therapy.
450 points, ended July 30, 2007, 18 entries
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This is a great poem, but I can't seem to quite get what it is exactly you're addicted to. I have a few things in mind, enlighten me? Great work. Thanks for entering, good luck!
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