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Amputee

Swing oh great pendulum
may you always meter my path
and guard against spontanaity
So I'll not fear God's wrath

Shine on stellar spotlight
and you're creamy crater face
please give us some hope
as you follow us through space

Thunderheads so high with power
you're static lightning flys
the rumble that's soon to follow
makes little children cry

And quiet does the river rush
as it calmly carries me
past all that was mankind
The World: an amputee.



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  • Cup-a-Joe silver member
    July 20, 2007
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    Wow

    You keep getting better & better. I love this.
    Joe

  • emLeejo
    July 20, 2007

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    Very interestling good!!!! Yes. thats right. this was awesome like always. as all your poems. are. thats right. you heard me. your awesome lol. my favorite stanza was

    "Thunderheads so high with power
    you're static lightning flys
    the rumble that's soon to follow
    makes little children cry"

    Great ! Great ! Nice Poem! lol