Swing oh great pendulum
may you always meter my path
and guard against spontanaity
So I'll not fear God's wrath
Shine on stellar spotlight
and you're creamy crater face
please give us some hope
as you follow us through space
Thunderheads so high with power
you're static lightning flys
the rumble that's soon to follow
makes little children cry
And quiet does the river rush
as it calmly carries me
past all that was mankind
The World: an amputee.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow
You keep getting better & better. I love this.
Joe

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Very interestling good!!!! Yes. thats right. this was awesome like always. as all your poems. are. thats right. you heard me. your awesome lol. my favorite stanza was
"Thunderheads so high with power
you're static lightning flys
the rumble that's soon to follow
makes little children cry"
Great ! Great ! Nice Poem! lol


