[Hunny Hunny:
I won't cross these streets until you hold my hand]
Diving in for this kiss
I never thought it'd turn to this
[wading in shower water & secret rhymes]
I used to fear the closeness of your body
but now, i fear them never connecting again
[back&forth, we rock together]
with your love on my lips
& your hands on my hips
[i feel almost stable, almost whole again]
take this heart, doll
I know it used to be something
[a heart, once upon a time]
with your eyes staring into mine
& your love blowing my mind
[a simple touch brings back memories]
playing monopoly with our hearts
& holding on by the soles of our shoes
[we can make it, just don't break it ♥]
With a look & we tip toe down the hall
we're sure of it all
[i can clearly read your mind]
dimming the lights, biting my thighs
oh, it all seems to be going so fast
[a thrust, kiss, & a door away from the world]
for hours, we lay against eachother
in the bathroom, we blend in together
[unlike any romance of it's kind]
when we finally come back to the world
the stars in my eyes match yours
[perfect. bliss. turned. into. this.]
[I have no fear,
my Prince Charming is here. ♥]
Author notes
I'm in the living room writing about my boi.
wishing he was right here.. well, in the next room laying beside me.
That would be perfect. =]]
A contest entry
- Whatever Goes by AshliiAsphyxiation.
300 points, ended August 25, 2007, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Felt" poetry. ONLY by shirk.
1500 points, ended October 8, 2007, 110 entries
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Comments
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Beautifully written, so raw. I used to feel that way about my boyfriend, it's a shame everything with me seems to go sour when I want it to go sweet. Still, I wish you the best of luck. When love is in the air and things are beautiful, just hold it, keep it - you never know after all how long it's going to stay.
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OHH you must know i love this
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babbyy this was amazing. making me wish even damn more that my boyy wasnt 19 hours away from me :[ gah.
simply.stunning,.
♥
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