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Just Call it...Thinking too Much

Luigi wishes he was like Mario, because he's the odd man out.
Why does Mario get the princess, and he gets nothing, what's that all about?
Luigi should be furious, he should kill Mario.
Over time Peach would be Luigi's, because she wouldn't know.
But would Luigi be able to stop...?

Luigi would go on a rampage, killing tons of people,
he would be great.
And if Bowser got in the way,
he would suffer the same fate.

Princess Peach would morn over Mario every day.
She hasn't talked to Luigi in awhile, he's drifting away.
He's going insane and crazy.
The King will die at the hands of Luigi.
Peach will still be his bride,
but Luigi, inside, has no more soul, no more pride.
He won't stop!

Luigi continues his rampage,
becoming great.
Once Peach looks at Luigi wrong,
she will suffer the same fate.

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  • Cherokee
    December 1, 2007
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    hmmmm... definitely thinking too much.


  • Simple-Fairytale
    July 27, 2007
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    haha. that was a really cool little story. lmao. wow. goodjob.