will you remember
all the tears we shared
will you remember
the laughter
when we wlked together
with nothing to say
will you remember
the silence that day
will you remember me
when we're old and astray
will you search the stars
untill we meet again
like rain, we fall together
like stars, we shine forever
will you remember
the way we always cared
together we stand
forever we last
until that day
when all is lost
when you forget
when we grow old
nothing can last
the ways we want to go
i only want one wish
one dream
always and forever
will you remember m
Author notes
"::I lost my fear of Falling::"
A contest entry
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Beautiful, beautiful write. I can't express just how touching this was. I appreciate this entry so much; it's perfect, besides the typos. Great flow, too!
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i liked this write, it has one of the best flows so far, nicely put together well done xx
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This is one of my favorite poems at the moment. I'm not sure why, probably because I can relate to it.
It has already been said, but you have a few typos in there.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Very cool. I am impressed by the way you express your self, and your feelings in this poem, but like me, your human, you have some typos in there make sure you fix them up
This was very well written, and it makes you wonder if that someone will stay with you. I can really apply this to my own life. I love how you directed this poem it was perfect in the presentation, and really leaves a lasting effect wonderful, simple and to the point great job.
xDanielx
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beautiful
seems simple, but that's the right thing, u made me feel your words (n that's the credit). well done
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