You are the traction on my shoes
keeping me from sliding down.
You are my favorite pillow
and you keep my feet warm.
You are my magic Eightball
because you have all the answers.
You will love me (all of me)
and I will love you too.
Author notes
Just for the contest. nothing i'm super proud of =P
A contest entry
- Best Of Broken Hearts (or revenge) by emLeejo.
600 points, ended August 5, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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mymy
madison that was awesome!!! i love it, it was deep, me and tristen love the part, you are my magic eight ball cause you have all the answers... i love it.. and i love you haha..
emily -
Cute
I wish I could come up with something to write. I have been with out a brain now for months.lol I like the begining, and the end, while the middle is also good.
Joe
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i shed a tear reading
"You are my favorite pillow, and you keep my feet warm" - that was so that day with him.. geez chica.. lol i really love this poem it does make me think theres still hope.. it was great. but seriously making me cry lol i miss him... darnit!
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