love vs. hate:
i love the way you love me
how you hold me in your arms
i love how your scared to lose me
so you'll never let go
but most of all, i love
loving you
i love the way you despise me
the hatefull words you say
i love when you ignor me
each and avery day
but most of all, i love
how i hate you all the same
i hate how you adore me
how you never leave my side
i hate how you play mad
just to get an apology
and best of all, i hate
how i hate you
i hate how i cant leave you
or hate you when your gone
i hate how i think of you
when nothing is wrong
but most of all, i hate
how i love you more and more each day
i love loving you
i love hateing you
i hate hating you
i hate loving you
but most of all......
i hate not being with you
how you never get a clue
how you'll never understand
just how much i love you
i love not hating you
how you play hard to get
how i have to send you messeges
that never make sence
i hate how i cant make up my mind
when i think of you
but most of all......
i hate you
i love you
Author notes
i dont really know how many emotions i used, i did my best tho , it just seems to match with your story i guess
A contest entry
- I Love You, I Hate You. (Pic inspried or Original) by Fey Absinthe.
500 points, ended July 21, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - heartbroken by the one you love by Purple-Meow.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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i love this poem i know how you feel and i love how you wrote it
GOOD LUCK -
thank you. you used, hate, confusion and love. that's good enough for me. good luck and anubis speed.
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I liked your love poem.
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