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Let me

Let me be the one you come to when you need comfort
let me be the one you come to when you need someone to talk to
let me be the one you come to when you need feel like crying
let me be the one you come to when you feel all alone
let me be the one you come to when you just need someone to hold you
let me be the one you come to when you when you feel scared
let me be the one you come to when you need a hand to hold
let me be the one you come to when you need a friend

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  • HugsForEveryone
    January 14, 2008
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    You have been that person. You still are that person. You are such a great person, you know. You helped me on my way to quit cutting. And I don't cut anymore! But I need you more than ever now, you have to come back!
    I love you bundles, remember when we used to say that?
    And I really mean it.
    I love you so much,
    and I miss you too.
    ~Pandy


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 29, 2007
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    this is sweet and the last line says it all let me be your friend


  • Samantha-.
    July 26, 2007
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    Very sweet. I love it and I totally understand.


  • Broken Machine
    July 20, 2007
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    I like it. & I totally understand. Keep up the great work.


  • JT Sammer
    July 20, 2007

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    I liked this write, the reptiveness of it was actually interesting, the only thing I would've advised about it is the captilazation at the beginning of each line. Beautiful write though, we all need that someone in our lives..Peace n' love, JT


    • MoonlightBeam
      July 20, 2007
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      thank you very much, I wrote it for some friends of mine who I want them to know I am always there for them

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