Symbol
of sacrifice
for all mankind release
of sins and salvation through God.
Jesus's grace of taking our sins, we're saved.
Only through his light may we come
upon the lord for redemption.
Our life's eternal light.
The Crucifix
Symbol
Author notes
crucifixion
Rictameter
I'm a Christian~ I had to go this way with the prompt.~
In a list
A contest entry
- I'm In a mood....QUICKIE TIME by PassionsPromise.
450 points, ended July 19, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JESUS AND HIS CHURCH!! by mysty rain.
600 points, ended August 15, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting way to take on the prompts. You really are an excellent writer/poet. You really deserved those trophies. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!
xXDCXx
~Make Peace, Not War~
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Beautiful words.
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Magnificent!!
I just want to cry after reading this
Powerfully moving piece penned and what images that stain the Mind also touches deep in Spirit~
Another piece to Love and also the form You penned this in
A Beauty!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Though I stumbled a bit on the punctuation, I do enjoy this work. In a very limiting form, you have managed a clear and meaningful message.
Well done.
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Thank you for this encouraging write.
A true poem indeed.
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This prayer
Will be recieved by many as very spiritual and by others , well this is AP. happy writing
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This is a beautiful poem with a lot of truth in it. excellent job and I love it. congratulations on both the silver and the HM.
kat
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Its really cool how you carefully wrote this so it got bigger then smaller
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I love this terrific Rictameter. I think these are a fun form to write and can make for some really fun reads.
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Congrats to you on the Trophies, lol and also congrats on a magnificent write inside of a good form
lol
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Great little poem. I love the image and style.
Judy
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true testament of His sacrifice.....
I really appreciate this piece. I've never written a Rictameter. This is so inspirational, and written with spiritual grace. Knight70
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aww, this is very beautiful, not only in message, but in form, you write awsome rictameters, I've never had much luck with them. Outstanding! I love it...
xxxooo, Love Sassy
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beautiful, heartfelt write my dear friend the sentiments come straight from your heart and it shows and a rictameter at that
don't know if i'll ever write another but i might just to prove that i can beautifully presented to congrats on the trophie(s) be well and be blessed
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Very powerful write! Jesus is the only one to save us! Wonderfully penned dear poet. Hey if you're not too busy or whatever, could you comment on my stuff? Maybe we could be friends! I'm a Christian too so I think it might be fun! I saw your comment you left on "A Lack of Wisdon"... if you need someone to talk to, about ANYTHING, I'm here for ya chick!
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This is a wonderful poem on the love that God has for us all, for the crucifixion was the greatest sacrifice He could give and the greatest proof of His love for us. The picture goes beautifully with the message you have written. Thank you so much for entering this into my contest and good luck. Mysty Rain
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Excellent. You are very good at these. I love the imagery in then poem and the message it conveys.
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Wow, this is very deep and meaningful. Congrats on the trophy, you deserved it. Nicely done, with a great and subtle message.
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Oh darlin, this is beautiful! Everything comes together perfectly within this piece...the sentiments, the shape...syllables...all of it. Congrats for the silver you totally deserved it!
Bella
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What a nice rictameter on this topic - nice shape, great picture as well - fits together very well. Think you have two lines of eight syllables though -
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Very nice!..your a true talent
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Beautiful write~ congrats on silver!
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Priceless poetry. Vivid tones and images. I hope soon to write rictameter ) The topic of the Cross is so powerful. As you imply a penalty was paid. His sacrificial offering propiation appeased. U speak of Jesus' grace.. in righteousness exchanged by the Cross. Your poem reconciles well the relationship restored for us. God bless sister!
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These seems like a poem all Christians should have posted on their walls somewheres as a little reminder... wonderful formed poem.
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This is an excellent rictameter. Beautiful language and perfect form.
Congratulations on the silver it was well deserved
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congrats on silver...great poem
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Wooooooo Hoooooooooo, ya got Silver at least, ya shouldda got the Gold dammit!!
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Excellent rictameter, inspirational, devotianal and a great take on crucifiction.
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wow great write and picture good luck, I haven't tried that form yet
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very nocely done, not only is sincerity and grace but also with form and presentation best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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This is actually what i was hoping for. This was awesome. Thank you so much for your entry. Loved it.
Tory...
just now choose one you feel should win gold and then we are done
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Oh My, a Rictameter quickie. A multitasking miracle of achievement. You are too good dear, you got my vote...Scott
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So true and well thought out.
Well done and good luck to you
with this one in the contest!
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this is great for the flow and form ... plus the meaning of this poem is so, deep and meaningful.
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inspiration(al)
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