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Tabloid Heartache

Tabloid heartaches,
crumpled pages of
yesterdays fame.

Super model in spotlight,
left on dilapidated runway.

Wine bottle ego shattered,
spilling wealth onto floor.

Licking up last drop of
dignity, thirsting for life.

Dying for perfection,
medicine for sadness,
she falls into coma of reality.

Silk rose of beauty,
dried up.

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 20, 2007

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    This is awesome. You must have went with the picture as the prompt. This is so true in the fashion world today. It's sad! Enjoyed the read!!!


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    Nice ~

    A rich play on the prompt ~

     

    Very well penned ~

     

    Good luck,

     

    Bear ~

     

     

    Wine bottle ego shattered,
    spilling wealth onto floor.

    Licking up last drop of
    dignity, thirsting for life.

     

     


  • Celticmoon
    July 19, 2007
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    First I have to sat I LOVE the title! This is a wonderful take on the picture prompt. Very creative!Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Celticmoon
    July 19, 2007

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    Starting this now and will judge when received 2 more entries to close contest.


    Your prompt is: Primal Calls


    Or


    The picture on main page