Lovers flock to carnivals of sorts
I always fancied these spots
Where girlfriends like to be brought
And occasional memories can be bought
Kids cry when colourful balloons go "PoP" --- *
Reminds me of my elation-inflated-rubbery-heart,
Pierced --------------->>> by stupid BoB
Love sent in airy toys will not exist for too long,
For they die in many ways:
Deflated, gutted, stepped on, Squished & Squashed . . .PoPPed --- *
Please don't give me balloons from the cL0Wn’s shop
Twisted thin straws conjugated, decorated with cheap ears studs, anointed
You said it meant “eternality &&bondage&& can be created anytime, anywhere with anything”
Surely the stickiness of sugary coke was intentional ?
Oh, sweet love is sticky at times, situational
(*) ne for you and (*) ne for me
Irregular, un-matching, xxPerfectionxx
We made vows upon these plastic rings, scratching
I am ashamed to say that mine pains to bear, regretting
It's the recycled thoughts that counts
=( “We shouldn’t have come” )=
Author notes
Wasn't easy, considering the title. Enjoy. You would feel what it is suppose to make you feel.
I changed the order of the title. I hope its okay.
Aodes
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Definitely unique and enjoyable. Great write. I love this.
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I really enjoyed this poem. You are great at grounding the emotions of the situation with a tangible reality (ex. the carnival details) brings a great balance.
I also love your cynical attitude in "Please don't give me balloons from the clown's shop"
Great job -
your title is: Plastic rings and popped balloons
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lolz, cool. I like random stuff. Let me see if i can write something nice. Hmm...plastic rings and popped balloons.
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yep have fun
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