[don’t]
fate guesses my future
of metallic sunshine
plaguing my soul
in bronze clandestine
[love]
eyes
look into
death’s wraiths;
as triggers
send reapers
[you]
the bullet
pierces emotions;
stagnant
A contest entry
- Quickie, 20 minutes, 10 entries, 30 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 20, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Golden Gallant - Pre-writes for Gold Brilliance by Namita.
300 points, ended August 4, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
Comments
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Hoodwinked!
An appropriate piece for a gold I must say,
I especially liked;
of metallic sunshine
plaguing my soul
Kudos!!!
JD
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Amazing piece. Good luck to you.
Luv,
Candy
Contest Holder
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Amazing piece. Good luck to you.
Luv,
Candy
Contest Holder
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this is honestly one of the best poem i think you have written, well in my eyes i love it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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wow, thank-you so much
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Wonderful piece, loved it Bunny
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Thanks so much Bunny
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This is great! I love the way you wrote this! Great emotion and depth. Awesome metaphor and imagery. Well done! best wishes to you!
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Thanks so much
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Screw the moving vans, get all your buddies over with their pick up trucks and a couple cases of beer and make a party of it..
Best of luck...Scott
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Haha, thanks
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this is a great take on the prompt. what a good job.
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Ooh, thank-you so much
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awww, I am going to cry, you don't love me? oh, well can not say I blame you.
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Thanks
....and what a bad thing to say about yourself -
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what the truth?
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*angry face*
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Your prompt! "Vocal Artillery"
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