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Harry, You Amaze Me

        Harry
        Oh Harry
        Why can't I marry
        You have charm
        You have wits
        You have everything a person would need.

        Your stories amaze me
        That put me on the spot
        I'll always be bowing down
        I have to thank a lot
        From the time you saved the Sorcere's Stone
        And you killed the Basalisk
        You saved Sirius
        And escaped Voldemort's murder on you
        Most important,
        You saved Arthur Weasly.

        You achieve many great things
        It's all from the heart
        But hatred is churning
        And tearing you apart
        A god-father is lost
        Into the abyss
        When Dementors are near
        There is frost
        And a cold windy mist.

      And now it ends here
      It'd be amazing to meet you
      Harry
      You are herioc and adventrous
      HARRY POTTER ROCKS!
   
       

A contest entry

Poem about a person that idolizes Harry Potter. I did Harry Potter. I love Harry Potter so much!!!!!!

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  • booklover56
    March 12, 2008
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    Nice!

    Is this Ginny's thinking? It would make sense if it was.
    Otherwise nice job!


  • Judo
    October 5, 2007
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    You have an amazing amount of knowlede, use it more


  • Kari gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    This is really good but there is one rule broke and it is this one -
    " Do not write about the characters in the story. " You can keep it it's a good poem but maybe use imagery with the title like suggested. Does what I say make since?

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    excellent

    Nicely done. Though I'm not a Harry Potter fan it's nice to read what fans have to say about him. I'm impressed. Thanks for sharing this. Lots of luck in the contest.
    Brian