I told you "Happy Birthday"
but you tell:
"It was 365 days ago!"
It feels one week ago
I told you "Happy Birthday"
but you tell:
"It was 365 days ago!"
I told you "Happy Birthday"
but you tell:
"It was 365 days ago!"
Author notes
Well, actually that's how I felt about your b.day
Great to see your contest is still open.
Love you and Happy Birthday again.
A contest entry
- My Birthday..18 entries, 17 words by Shakari.
300 points, ended July 31, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is funny.
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What a good way to celebrate birthday with someone. Yeah it seems just one week when we have the chance of telling this sentence to a friend. Again you made me laugh, sissy. You are a wonderful poet and friend
~Vernal Bloom~
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Time amazing
How time flies by.
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Awww...thanks! This piece was cute and reflects my feelings about all birthdays because time flies by too quickly. So much was said and I thank you for your entry. Keep up the great work, good luck, and thanks for sharing!
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You're welcome. It really felt it was last week, for I can still remember how excited you were to turn to 16.
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Time is flying!!! This one made me smile, because it's true. Oh how time flys!
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Thank you dear friend.
Shahrzad
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Lovely Poem
Good morning. It is always so nice to remember a friends birthday. They are special days to all of us. Thanks for sharing this my sweet niece. You take care and have a beautiful weekend. Aunt Sandy
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hi my lovely auntie
Great to have you as my first reader.
Shahrzad
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