Promises you make to me are now broken and frail.
Becoming intwined with lies that have caused my trust to fail.
What you have done, has made a permanent scar.
It's damaged what's inside me, i'm losing who we are.
There is nothing I can do, and there's nothing i can say.
To make my trust come back, or make this hurt go away.
You must fix what you've destroyed, somehow save me again.
Show me what we still have and remind me of what we've been.
I'm scared to death of where we are, or where we might go.
And questions running through my head, don't help me know.
I don't know what to say, or who i'm beggining to be.
But i want to be with you forever, because i love you baby.
BY:Corey Klosterman
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i don't need to tell what this is about it's pretty self explanitory,lol. well just comment, that's all i wan't anyway; your feed back.
Please tell me what you think
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This poem reminds me of a book by Stephanie Meyer have you heard of her?? well the book is called New Moon and it is sooo sad but this poem reminds me so much of that book and I am very impressed too. You did very well on this poem it is well written and I enjoyed reading it very much!! =]]]]
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never sure...
to tell you the truth, i'm never sure about them. ok that isn't entirely true but i really don't know. i also think the title is off, lol. but that's ok i'm not perfect so just read and comment ok.... thnx.
*mistertriple*
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