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the right to exist

                                                                                                                                                                     




              The right to exist



You created me.
                                                            It is not through choice that I am what I am
Therefore give to your devoted servant the right of life.
                                       
No matter how abhorrent I may seem in your eyes
No matter the destruction that follows in my wake
I live therefore I claim the right of all things living the right to exist.

The fact that I have slain a hundred thousand whilst borne on a summer breeze gives you no right to deprive me of my life.
Though I come among you my scythe fresh from the whetstone reaping a harvest of souls I exist.

Therefore I claim the basic right of all things living

The right to exist.


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  • Cynthia Gaines
    August 10, 2008

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    Very thought-provoking...

    and somewhat disturbing... I had thoughts of the grim reaper in mind. This is an unusual poem, and a bit too dark for me. Great use of metaphor!!! As they say here on AP, write on, shine on, Poet!!! Peace, Cyn


  • La Belle Rouge
    August 2, 2007
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    Deep

    Bill this is a very tought provoking write, enjoyed contemplating its message.


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    July 28, 2007

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    A very intersting write. A person can read a lot into it. To me it sort of rang as a statement by the grim reaper. Perhaps because of the mention of the scythe.

    Thanks for entering it into the contest. Best of luck