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deminished heart

why'd ya leave? God smothe me and I panicked now I am here sweeping up the pigments of my broken heart...

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  • Asylaarix
    July 23, 2007

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    Short ... Sweet ... 2 The point ... very well done for being so short ... Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest

    Much Luv
    Sparkeh