You are the one that makes me crazy
And I can't stop thinking about you.
Its the fact that you maybe lazy
But I don't care that you are.
It shouldn't matter
I shouldn't care.
But I can't help it
You just turned me down right there.
I can't take you back
I trusted my life to be.
With you by my side
To hold me and to let me be.
Why did you take that away from me?
You may not care about me
But I still care for you.
Somehow, somewhere.
It doesn't matter how long it is
But I still think of you.
Of how happy you made me be
Then you take it and run off with someone else.
I can't believe that I fell for all of those lies
That you said to me.
About who you really are
And for that I can no longer trust you or what you say.
Let me ask you this,
How, How can you just leave?
After all you may be famous
But that gives you no right to do what you did.
I don't know why
But I want you by my side once again.
Instead you couldn't face the fact
Even though we fit each other perfectly.
Why can't you see that we magnificently fit
Or have you confided with in your friends?
You shouldn't trust anyones word but your own.
I should know, you taught me that.
So why don't you take your own advice
Instead of someone else's?
But here is some advice,
Advice is NEVER nice to anyone except to those who give it.
You were the perfect person that I knew
You still are and always will be.
No matter what happens to us
You are still my one and only.
A contest entry
- Choices-Pagan/Love/Occult/Mystery by HeirOfEnoch.
530 points, ended April 17, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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what a great poem here friend. you are so convincing in this it sounds like a real relationship. Bravo!!!!
*peace* -
The tone of rejection is evident in this, and I hope you feel better even in the aftermath.


