I am using the first quote
never what I am suppose to do, do I do,
to cut myself with the reality of what I am clenching in,
towards to what sorrows and as well to what ills,
purpose to what pleases as to being slapped in the fucking face...
A contest entry
- My mind is in overdrive [Quote inspired contest] by Confetti Fairy-x.
1110 points, ended July 25, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ok
i'm sorry about that usaually I do tend to focus a little bit more but I think my mind was some place else -
you didnt follow any of the rules.
this is not very poetic and you didn't look deep into the meaning of the quote.
i think it would need a lot of work
Thanks for entering though
Con -
please read and reply to my workcx I would be glad to reply to any wether costructive critism or not.
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