When tears fall
upon skin, no longer shed
clothing...
...but emotions
-Did he
have to
break my
heart?-
Or was it
desperation ringing
in his voice
that killed me
inside.
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward............Mr C will prompt......15/30/Whenever. by Mr C.
475 points, ended July 21, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Good job. Congrats on the silver!
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wow! this is so full of emotion. so so much pain...this is great. so sorry for your loss. there is so much pain in your words........but it produced a beautiful poem,,,,,,
~~~in love in death
~~~~~
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This sounds like it could be both dearie. good luck.
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An interestingly done poem for the given prompt, I loved the way you put it, best of luck in the contest...Scott
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Thank you for entering my P.I.F......................love this.....full of emotion....(and self-destructive behaviour)....I am a fan!
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PROMPT: Where the mind is past hope, the heart is past shame.
Author: John Lyly
Do your best, kids.
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