There’s no way
you leave my mind
I carry you in my heart
like a rock
And it’s so hard…
Every day I think
you will be here
But that’s just a dream
I made up…
To stop my tears
from falling
Your silence eating me
The missing hurting me
The loving you killing me
You can’t be replaced
by no one
So here I sit…
Alone…
Crying…
Dying…
Author notes
CHOCOLATE
You will always be in my heart...
A contest entry
- ~~~PREWRITE CONTEST~~~ by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended August 3, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - loosing a loved one by karas.
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You can't be replaced, by no one...
Comments
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wow that touched mty heart
good luck thanx for entering -
agony filled!
Each word is like a blow..a pain that comes after loss of love..so serene and soothing pain..that can only be felt by those who have gone through it! There is an absolutely slow movement in it and the text colours amplify the effect!! Beautiful!!
Thanks for entering your write!
Good luck!
luv
pri
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so sad
Oh Jeannette, this is so, so, sad. I know it is killing you inside, and I pray you can get through this pain. Trying to get someone out of your mind is a difficult task, especially when you still have strong feelings for them.
I know you will find the strength to overcome all of this hurt.
Love & Hugs to you my friend,
Jeannette C.
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So beautiful, Jeannette. This poem struck close to home. Many lines were easily related with the thoughts and feelings I carry around with me surrounding my mothers death.
Your words [as always] are beautiful, and touching. Very elegant.... It's always a pleasure to read your poems. Infact, I've missed them quite a bit.
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Yeah I know, it's hard, and we just have to keep on moving don't we? Carrying this loaded weight in our hearts
It is good to see you back on, I missed your comments too, well and your writings, so I do hope there will be more coming soon
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Jeannette I felt this one in the very pit of my stomach. this one hits very hard. Love I wish that you could stop hurting, but I know how it is...it takes time to heal.
love
Jamila
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I feel such pain in this write. I wish there were words that I could say to make you feel better. The only thing I personally know is that time heals. I have felt this pain your going through....so I do understand. I do know that writing has released alot when I'm going through things like this. Just know that I am here if ever you want to talk or share.
A very deep emotional write.
debbie
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wow my dear frien i love it...there isnt much else to say but i am amazed
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I hate that you hurt so bad. I hope writing helps to get it out. I know a broken heart is hard to get over, especially when your love for them is still there. Hang in there dear friend. I am here for you as well as your other friends!
Jeannie
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It makes me so sad that you hurt so much, i pray that your always beautiful release of words helps you find comfort and closure
...and know that even though i am far, you are NEVER alone
beautiful thoughts from a beautiful mind my friend
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