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Sense


Somedays, sometimes we just need to get away
walking on sunshine and letting the whole world fade away
so far away

We're living on sunlight
breathing in air
in this beat up old truck we could
go anywhere

I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road

of this long, long road

Days go by
forget counting minutes
or else what's the use in living
if all you're gonna do
is regret
what's the sense in that

so please wont you
run away with me
hold on tightly
and in seconds we'll leave

and keep on going
untill we
run out of road

one more horizon
one more sunrise
one more day spent
beneath saphire skies

I dont know about you
but I'm begining to feel
that this right here
is the only thing that's real

We're living on sunlight
breathing in air
in this beat up old truck we could
go anywhere

I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road

of this long, long road

Don't say goodbye
don't say hello
Just go for a ride
who cares how far we go

As long
as we go

I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road


one more horizon
one more sunrise
one more day spent
beneath saphire skies


Days go by
forget counting minutes
or else what's the use in living
if all you're gonna do
is regret
what's the sense in that


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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 4, 2007

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    COME SAIL AWAY WITH ME!

    This is a very nicely written poem, however, we're supposed to be sailing, not driving down the road in an old truck (not my idea of a fun vacation)...


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    July 22, 2007

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    sweet

    loved this as a poem it had such flow good luck in the contest i would love to hear this put to music it has a lyrical quality about it good job here


  • tawk gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    What an inspirational and uplifting song. With wonderful imagery and emotions. Good luck in the contest