Somedays, sometimes we just need to get away
walking on sunshine and letting the whole world fade away
so far away
We're living on sunlight
breathing in air
in this beat up old truck we could
go anywhere
I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road
of this long, long road
Days go by
forget counting minutes
or else what's the use in living
if all you're gonna do
is regret
what's the sense in that
so please wont you
run away with me
hold on tightly
and in seconds we'll leave
and keep on going
untill we
run out of road
one more horizon
one more sunrise
one more day spent
beneath saphire skies
I dont know about you
but I'm begining to feel
that this right here
is the only thing that's real
We're living on sunlight
breathing in air
in this beat up old truck we could
go anywhere
I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road
of this long, long road
Don't say goodbye
don't say hello
Just go for a ride
who cares how far we go
As long
as we go
I know there's a place
a place where we could go
it's just a little bit further
at the other end of the road
one more horizon
one more sunrise
one more day spent
beneath saphire skies
Days go by
forget counting minutes
or else what's the use in living
if all you're gonna do
is regret
what's the sense in that
A contest entry
- Take Me Away!! by tawk.
700 points, ended July 24, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Everything you've Got by CrystalJet.
600 points, ended March 14, 2008, 318 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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COME SAIL AWAY WITH ME!
This is a very nicely written poem, however, we're supposed to be sailing, not driving down the road in an old truck (not my idea of a fun vacation)... -
sweet
loved this as a poem it had such flow good luck in the contest i would love to hear this put to music it has a lyrical quality about it good job here

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What an inspirational and uplifting song. With wonderful imagery and emotions. Good luck in the contest





