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reflections~ haiku

 

at the lake s

                 i

                d

                e

 

                        moon in each

 

                                                 p        d          l
                                                       u         d        e
     
       

 

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    August 13, 2007

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    Lovely imagery! I like the shape effect too. I could see this soo clearly! Congrats on the Gold!!

    Thank you for sharing,
    Char


  • Mari Goes gold member
    July 31, 2007

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    You made it different, never saw a haiku written in that way (shape)
    It's wonderful mina, the moon is a great source of inspiration, and it did inspire you in such a lovely way

    • mina nagi
      August 1, 2007
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      Thank you Mari
      Because the contest was on "Shape of Haiku"...

      mina


  • between slices
    July 31, 2007

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    stellar!! i just LOVE this piece.. your image is so vivid, so striking... and i just love the way metaphorically the moons seem to have multiplied... such an awesome photographic moment.. any sorrow should be gone at that sight..

    well deserved!! CONGRATS on the gold!


  • maa gold member
    July 31, 2007
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    congratulations on winning gold, my friend ...
    I am very proud of you ...

    maa

    • mina nagi
      July 31, 2007
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      Thanx

      Maa, I couldn’t believe it… it came as a strong revelation like a third line of Haiku …
      Thank you for the encouragement…

      mina


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 30, 2007

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    Wow! This is gorgeous!
    Definitely deserving of the Gold.
    Very creatively done.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • bengalibelle
    July 26, 2007
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    Hi!i!Really good work and such an innovative shape!
    Keep Haikuing!! All the best!


  • abuyi
    July 26, 2007
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    amazing.. the haiku and the the design, very creative
    best of luck in the contest


  • maa gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    this is such an amazing haiku put into form ...
    from the technical point of view, it is perfect, and you just added the extra surprise with your special design ... I love moon-haiku ... they are my absolute favorite ...

    the best of luck in the contest,

    maa


  • Pollycheck
    July 22, 2007

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    Thank you for entering our workshop/contest, "The Shape of the Haiku." Good luck.

    at the lake s

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    d

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    moon in each



    p d l
    u d e

    This is just outstanding. I really like both the haiku and the concrete form. I think that it is very good just the way it is.


  • azure85 gold member
    July 22, 2007

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    Very lovely haiku, and the shae of it enhances the meaning in a delightful way. Thank you for such a fun haiku to read!

  • a u r a
    July 20, 2007
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    wow

    A million wows would not do justice to this shape of haiku-the title is so apt- the backdrop is so just right- and the haiku has so much of depth- reflection or rather reflections in a broad sense of the word-I have enjoyed this a whole bunch- You truly are a gifted poet- you have the pulse that makes brilliant emoting in words and pictures

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