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(the/most/beautiful/dance)

you're coming home
can you feel me here
hold me down
seduce the fear
its rich and

//./the most beautiful dance/.//

between the sheets
caress my hair
//./i'll. .hold. .you. .close/.//
you touch me there
and this room is all to ourselves

so shut the door
turn out the light
/hold/me/close/
this is our night
just please, //./don't. .tell. .me. .to. .stop/.//

i kiss your lips
you touch my face
don't leave me now
/i/crave/the/taste/
of your sweat rolling off of your skin
and i'll soak you in

so i close my eyes
//./its so intense/.//
i fill your hands
with innocence
and together, we throw it away

so we lay down
into this bed
the sheets are green
steps fill my head
of //./the. .most. .beautiful. .dance/.//

im melting down
no room for fear
//./we fit together/.//
as we lay here
and your hands fold into mine
as we lose track of time

no time to talk
just time to move
//./you. .on. .top/.//
my legs are smoothe
and ready for you to hold

so take my hand
and tell me when
//./lay. .me. .down/.//
i'll take you in
to //./finish. .the. .most. .beautiful. .dance/.//

the room is hot
but i feel you shake
/.//i. .close. .my. eyes/.//
for the moves you make
and this deep kiss is the way it ends

so let me explore you
//./i. .need. .you/.//
adore you
just tell me
"tonight is our night"

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Written August 29th, 2003

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  • TheColorofBlood
    January 3, 2004
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    lol.. i really like it...


  • xforeverydeath
    September 25, 2003
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    Hot.

    I remember reading this on your journal. It's like, "i love you, let's fuck" sort of thing. anyway.

    Nice