tied to the water
so calm and pure
tied to the unknown
heading to the shore
high hopes are born
the waters are trembling
I started to get scared
my life is destroyed
no,no I scream
for my happiness I'll fight
on my feet again I stood
i started mending my boat
smiled to the world
and head for a new sea
armed with faith and hope
feeling strong
discovering new waters
sailing to new land
new dreams and hopes
along in my life's boat
I'll struggel
I'll fight
I'll reach the land I want
one day I'll put my flag
I'll win
I'll restart
build my boat
sail in the troubled waters
dive in
taste the bitter and salt
and taste the sugar and honey
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired by Cannonsfire.
4500 points, ended July 20, 2007, 11 entries
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This has great imagery in it but would benefit from some punctuation, to accentuate line breaks and give accents to certain words. I thank you for the entry Love, C
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