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No Ordinary Girl

She was no ordinary girl,
She was a one in a million.
One that was also happy,
And willing to always forgive.
She didn’t know why she did it,
Why no matter what she said, “It’s okay.”
But she knew that if she didn’t,
She would never be happy.
She had to let it go,
Had to be able to be the bigger person.
Even when the person really hurt her,
And to others wasn’t worth it.
She fell in love too easily,
Most likely she fell in lust.
She always fell for the losers,
That only cared about sports and other stuff.
But through it all,
She remained unique.
Even when she was hurt so bad,
She could barely speak.
But then again,
She was no ordinary girl.
She was a one in a million,
And lived in her own world.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove
    August 15, 2007

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    this is beautiful love i was very honored to read this it also felt like you were sort of speaking right at the old me you reaklly did a out standing job very expressive and deep with style and very poetic


    • Under Construction
      August 15, 2007
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      Thnxx for the comment! I'm honored to have YOU read MY poems. Even though I can't read most of them, by your page I can tell that you're a dedicated writer.


  • RuLives4GodOnly
    August 8, 2007

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    Such passion in these lines of self-senerity. I can DEFINITELY relate. I seem to be the girl who's quiet and shy, reserved even. But sometimes, I feell like breaking out of my sshell; schocking people with my revellious ways but knowing that as a "Woman of God" and a "Daughter of Zion" I have a MUCH higer calling than that of this world, this present time. And yes, sometimes it IS harder to be the bigger person and forgive knowing good and welll you'd like to cuss them out but, the Holy Spirit within you won't allow it... This REALLY hit home for me and I REALLY needed this! Perfect timing! Thank you!


  • countrygurl2931
    July 21, 2007
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    sorry

    I forgot to put this with my first comment but it is totally worth it here ya go AWESOME!!!


  • countrygurl2931
    July 21, 2007

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    OMGosh

    That was a true awesome poem it wasn't there about sounding alike and stuff it was true passion and meaningful!! I loved this poem!

    love, Brandi


  • Miss Insolence
    July 19, 2007
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    Tre Fab!

    btw: congrats on getting 100 poems! YAAAY


  • BXs Finest
    July 19, 2007

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    wow...i think im seeing what all ur poems are about....beautiful write! gorgeous darling

    luv ya,
    savonna

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