Night time.
Solitary darkness.
Stationary stars.
Zero gravity moon.
No changing tides,
No shifting luck.
Stagnate.
Karma reciprocates.
Ebb and flow,
Good blow for bad blow.
Under the ether,
Some low atmosphere,
Stratospheric qualities.
The higher they fly,
The longer they fall.
Mid-air duality…
Rising high,
Sinking low.
Air of temptation.
Disintegration.
Human entity.
Water precipitates,
Dissipates,
Nature’s cycle--
Tears.
Falling upward,
Rising low.
Turning fears,
Facing foes.
Hands out to hold on--
Nothing there.
No one.
Are you there?
Anywhere?
Fall after me….
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good piece, I would suggest adding a (,) after the line, "No shifting luck." This is because every line subsequent to, and including it are inclusive to the same general idea, which is a stagnation. Besides that the poem has the same general theme you've expressed many times before, you acknowledge the duality of life, even here you say it, not in the same words but the yin and yang. good job
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