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The nose

I stand up tall with my head tilted back,
Avast my powers in two holes of black,
My body straight my nostrils arose,
One sniff from this nose can suck up your floors,
I never blow to keep the snobs,
Green and gooey in sticky blobs,
One gentle sneeze your on your knees,
Begging for mercy to stop this please,
Snot that flies to a thousand feet,
Runny and slimy with tremendous heat,
Hair inside that can pierce steel,
Soft in appearence but a deadly feel,
So always look out for a head tilted back,
with silky nose hair and nostrills off black,
Try to be carefull im sometimes cranky,
But one things for sure i wont have a hanky,
Wherever i am, it always goes,
So you be carefull for such a deadly nose,

Rhymz






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In real life i have a hanky, everything else goes tho

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  • Death of the Author
    August 2, 2007

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    This reminds me a lot of my mums sneezes, I swear she blows the bloody roof off! I liked this...not the average superpower it has to be said! This was a fun poem to read, thank you for entering it into my contest x good luck and take care x


  • Lilreddragon
    July 24, 2007

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    yuck the snot is bad. That would be gross. The nose hair is very bad. the poem is good but the stuff is bad. you need the hanky.