I cry, i never thought it meant that much i never thought i
would think of this.
When i cry,i cry for you i cry for you because the love that
i have keep from you. I see you hurt i see you die. I don't know
why i'm being so shy. You'r hurting i see but what does it have
to do with me? I know you hurt and all i do is cry, i'm such a baby
and all i say is bye. I have to go and i shut myself in my room
becuse i saw you hurting it's my worst nightmare i wish i never had
to see you'r tears i wish i didn't have to face this fear.
I Cry and when you come in my room you'r the one who cry's at the
sight of me you wonder why i cry. You see my pain you start to
sigh, and you hold me and i close my eyes.
I cry, and you cry at least were together.
Author notes
Boya this is like the best poem i have written in forever, has nothin' to do with me but i made it real
A contest entry
- Write about almost anything you want. by TheDevilInYourHead.
430 points, ended August 23, 2007, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round One: Prewrites Only by reckless abandon.
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Very well done. I like the way this was written and I really loved reading it! Thanks for entering and good luck!
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Congrats it purdy good YAYAYAAYY
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Great job. I saw a few spelling errors but they were minor. This showed great emotion and amazing writing skills. I really enjoyed reading this and was not disappointed with it at all.
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I know how this feels and ergg you got it on the dot!!
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thanx shelb
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wow. this gave me shivers. I love it, so deep and beatiful.
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thanks,it took me a while to write
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