How could you say you loved me?
When you kept me in a cage
I gave you a daughter
and seven years of my life
I loved you as a wife should
What did I get in return?
Nothing, not even love
I wasn't allowed to have friends
To much hassle, to many questions
So what did I do?
Pretend, I was happy
Just me and you
But your jealousy suffocated me,
I stopped feeling and dreamt of being free
Lost myself in the computer,
Started talking to people on AP
The straw that broke the camels back
I couldn't believe it you were even jealous of that
So now we are falling apart, I get so mad with myself
because I'm letting it break my heart
I tell people I'm fine, but most of the time I cry
I'm in an emotional free fall wondering when it will stop.
A contest entry
- Best Of Broken Hearts (or revenge) by emLeejo.
600 points, ended August 5, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you deserve this? by Never Fall in Love.
850 points, ended August 14, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm.. interesting. I don't really know what else to say except that I'm sorry.
NeveR ♥ -
awe sugar i which i was there to give you a hug and my shoulder cause we are experiencing the same thing why we were cursed with jealous men in our life hell do we deserve this? not by a long shot but we are to beautiful people inside out and there is no stop signs on our limitations believe me
you are strong
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Wow. that was an amazing write, and im so sorry that you have to deal with that. that must suck. but this was a very nice poem.. i hope you the best of luck in the contest
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