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Blink of the Eye

Electric currents
and lightning rods-
Fall to the unseen fire!

Hidden wrath
and fear itself-
Summit to the storm's entire!

Grasp to rubber
or turn and fight,
You'll never glimpse my face!

Where thunder stops
or lightning peaks,
You'll never find a trace!

I'll shake you down,
Oh, mighty earth!
I've only to blink and eye.

I'll come for you,
Oh, mighty earth,
On seslfish men you can't rely.

Author notes

I wrote this after that ferocious storm on July 18th

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  • Nyabbi
    July 25, 2007
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    Thunder crackle lightening rod storm over head HAHAHA REMEMBER THAT :]]]] great write as always


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 19, 2007

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    wow this is something strong i like this, kind of like a tempest or something, keep it flowing this is golden


  • Gasp
    July 19, 2007
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    your such a great poet! i love this poem. great job!!!!

    ~!~keep writing~!~

    ~gasp~


  • thelovesongwriter
    July 19, 2007
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    great imagery, i can certainly feel the intensity in this.
    excellent job